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Re: My tongueless goodbye
Oh, My God You are such a good poet. How do you come up with this stuff? Most time when I write a poem I sit there for like an ...
Apr 5, 2006 -
Re: Turning coffee into Wine
I thought this poem was very discriptive and the imagery was very good. But I wasn't really sure what you were trying to say in this poem but that's probably ...
Apr 2, 2006 -
Re: OMGOT! The BESTTEST masterpeace wrotten!!
It makes me want to shake my Humps that rock the socks of all the one's that had what it said tomorrow but not as much as yesterday but as ...
Apr 2, 2006 -
Re: The DaVinci Code
Well I thought the book wasn't bad, though I abrubtly stopped reading it when he mentioned his theory about Jesus Christ and Mary Magdalene. Don't get me wrong, I know ...
Mar 5, 2006 -
Re: My Star (crits most definantly needed and wanted)
sorry for that last post. first of all "Though may not notice me at this time." change it to Though "you" may not notice me at the time. and add ...
Feb 12, 2006 -
Re: VampireTorium 1: All Access Pass
hi i think you have something going there, but.... you need to fix some parts in your writings. sometimes there are just pieces of a word in sentence. on some ...
Feb 4, 2006
